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14th-Mar-2006 09:42 pm
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Story Title: Demons Among The Living.
Culprit: kakashi’sdaughter OH. MY. GOD.
Summary: Story of a girl who is cursed with 2 demons sealed inside her. i'm bad at this summary. the story's good. please read. Too bad it’s not.

Rating: Three Kunai- Bleach-Worthy At least it wasn’t a chatfic.

Full Name(s): UNKNOWN It’s not said, you have no idea how pissed I am right now.
Species: Stealius Naruto Backgroundigus
Hair: none described
Eyes: not described
Markings: none so far
Possessions: TWO DAEMONS IN HER NAVALS. OMFG

Origin: The Village Hidden In The Waterfall. Which I have just been informed, DOES EXIST.
Special Connections to Canon: has stolen Naruto’s FREAKING STORY.
Speshul Abilities: I dunno

Personal Rants You know… this one time… I watched this show. It was a lot like this story… ‘cept the demon character was a guy. He’s name was NARUTO. It’s a pretty good show… THAT ALREADY EXISTS.

My life has been nothing but a disaster from the start. I mean for crying out loud, I’ve had demons sealed in side me since the day I was born. Not exactly the life you’d want for your child. Then again, my parent’s were never around to see me grow up. My mother died in child birth. My father, well, lets just say that he’s the one who did the sealing. Then died afterwards. I grew up with my brothers. My older brother Eric, and my twin brother Cole. Eric was only 4 when mom and dad had died. At least he got to know them. From what we know of, we have no known relatives, so we live with my ‘friend’ since birth, Luke, and his family. His father being the head ninja of our little village, hidden in the waterfall. How’s that to say, “So, who are your parents?” “Oh, well my dad was the lord Hokage (Sorry if that’s wrong, please correct me!), and he and my mom are dead. So his best friend’s family took me in. Oh, and now he’s the new head honcho(SP?)” yeah, that’s a mouthful. I don’t really talk that much. So why the hell I’m writing this I have no idea. I couldn’t agree more.

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So, yeah, that’s my birth. From that day forward, I was shunned, feared ,and hated. No one cared about me, excluding my brothers. No one wanted to be within a mile of me, let alone look at me. It sucks. No one treated me who my father wanted me to be treated. Like a hero. Someone who had saved the village, had saved their lifes. But that’s all over now. I’m a gennin now, and now I’m off to the Chunin Exmas in Konoha. Were no one knows me. Doesn’t bother me. Maybe if I get bored enough I’ll get to kill someone. Turns outs I did end up in the same cell as my father’s friend’s son, Luke, and my brother, Cole. Eric’s in an older cell, with Luke’s older brother, Yoshi, and a guy named R.J. We’re all headed to the Chunin Exams. Who knows what will happen…
Comments 
15th-Mar-2006 04:00 am (UTC)
That...is awful. Really, it is. RJ? Luke? Yoshi? *weeps*

And I believe the Village in the Waterfall does exist. It was involved in the Chuunin exam, alongside Rain, Grass, Sound, etc.
15th-Mar-2006 06:29 pm (UTC)
Yeah, me and my Naruto expert of a friend were seething over the names. I mean really, does it take that much effort to go to Google and type 'Japanese names'? C'mon, does it?
15th-Mar-2006 11:22 pm (UTC)
Well, Yoshi is a Japanese name, but the other two are just painful. And they probably got Yoshi from Mario, anyway, so it doesn't count.
15th-Mar-2006 11:31 pm (UTC)
Your icon is just precious.
15th-Mar-2006 11:40 pm (UTC)
Innit though? The person who made it rawks.
15th-Mar-2006 08:40 pm (UTC)
There are actually quite a few Hidden Villages-

Leaf
Sound
Grass
Waterfall
Sand
Rock
Cloud
Mist
Rain
Snow

I think that's all... and sometimes Hidden Snow isn't even counted, since it's only in the first Naruto movie :\

Needless to say, every time I see a Konoha-Sue, I wonder, why couldn't they be from some OTHER village? I've got a bunch of OCs and they're from other villages. Konoha might be one of the largest, but they certainly aren't the ONLY village of ninjas!
15th-Mar-2006 09:06 pm (UTC)
oh dear. I love you, avatarsues <3
18th-Mar-2006 10:12 am (UTC)
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I think the most mind bending thing about this is why would any of the Tailed Beasts care enough to attack the Waterfall village? It's notorious for being small and having no standout shinobi or kunoichi. Seriously, they have to drink some damned special water just to fight at a specialist jounin level...

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